Preliminary feedback
The whole class took place in a verbal evaluation of our Preliminary. They stated all the things that went well and could be improved upon.

The main factor of disappointment was the fact that our timing is not right and we shall make improvements on all these.
Anna quoted that the shots are good but the music just doesn't make sense with the preliminary and that i shouldn't leave the audience this confused for our main production. Veronika agreed and added that the shots were to cut through and did not flow and maybe we should think about fading out the music to make the whole ting smoother. Dean pointed out that the lighting was very bad and if effected the quality of the filming dramatically and we need to think about these issues before hand with where we place our characters. Dawn suggested that we shouldn't leave our audience second guessing about certain things, for example Bushir came out from no where no visions of what door or anything this was not realistic and was presented as a stage show not meeting up with general key factors of making a clip or film seem realistic and flow.