This is my step one analysis of my chosen genre, after self debating and a very long conversation with my review it as been decided that i need major improvements in these key areas:
- Giving more analysis on the opening clip its self in terms of setting, characters, pathetic fallacy?
- How i would go about grasping the readers attention
- Considering angle, position and movement
- costume? mis-en-sense
- come up with a well rounded perspective of opening
I agree with the improvements and I'm glad you recognize and understand them, looking forward to see you're next steps! :D
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